We have been talking about paragraph structure:
a) topic sentence: what you promise to tell me
b) three support sentences (at least): details about your topic
c) concluding sentence: a reminder to the reader what you promised to tell them
Today, in your Blog response, I would like you to write a complete paragraph about your favourite hobby. (Hint: tell me what your hobby is in your topic sentence but keep the details for the next three sentences)
Remember to reread your post before submitting it, check your spelling and punctuation.
As always, I look forward to reading your responses!
Love, Mrs. French
32 comments:
my hobbies
My favorite hobbie is going on to ebay and finding toys that I like.My favorite toy so far is the halo toy's I have been looking at he comes with a gun. and there is another guy a alien he has silver armor.
stuff that i like
My hobbyies is.
(1)qurading
(2)dirt biking
(3)
fishing
my favourite hobbies are ......
basketball because i enjoy running around bouncing the ball and shooting it in the hoops.I also like quadding because i get to do donuts and rip around and go fast. I like skipping to playing differnt games when were skipping and just jumping up and down also trying not to stop or mess up.
My favorite hobby is working out how elictricity works elictric motors, light bulbs and stuff like that. light bulbs are one of the more easy ones to make because the elictic surkit is pretty simple. You put one end of a copper wire to the negitive side of the battery ( or anouther power souce) then the another to the positive side. then if it is a "non florecint bulb" you touch one of the wires to one side and the other to the other side or if it is another kind of bulb then you rap one wire arond it and touch the other to the bottom. this will make and elitric surkit. The way it glose is the wire inside the light bulb is so resistant to elictricity that it gets wery hot so it glose. My hobby is making elictric things.
I have many hobbies.One of them is biking. In the summer my brother and I go to the Vanderhoof bike park. I also make dirt jumps at my house. I have many hobbies but my favorite one is biking.
Hi Mrs.French my favouite hobby is horse back riding. My horse's name is Cameo.Cameo and I like jumping, we both are good at jumping. Cameo and I jump 2 feet and 3 inch.My favourite hobby is horse back riding.
I love Hockey. I like to play in net. I play in my basment. Next year I play in hitting at the Hockey arena. Hockey is fun to me.
My Favorite Hobby
My Favorite Hobby is playing out side and playing football.My thumb got spranded when I was playing out side.I fell of the swing when i got pushed.My favorite hobby is playing outside.
my hobby is playing with my puppy.he is a border collie the smartest dog on earth.they are very high on enery.and they are very playful.his name is brouno.brown ones are rare and hes brown.roxy ower other border collie had a litter and brorno is one the rest we sold.the are sheep dogs.so sines my dad has sheep we will trane him.and wene ever it is sunny we go play.rox his mom has a brocen leg.heres the story.my older sisters were riding then a car came by and she loves balls and tire are round so she nibelled at them and the car ran over her.so me and my mom went to see and frokje helpet the driver get to our home and my friends lived close so they hered a screme and ran up them wene i saw them i ran to them and then me my mom and my friends thot it was my sister but wene we got home we notest that it was roxy.the end.and one night brouno lost two teeth.
these are some of my favourite hobbys
horse back riding (barback)
dirt biking (fun)
helping my family on the farm
danceing
runing
and exetra extra
those are some of my hobbys
these are some of my favourite hobbys
horse back riding (barback)
dirt biking (fun)
helping my family on the farm
danceing
runing
and exetra extra
those are some of my hobbys
my hobies are dirtbiking ,hockey,fishing,swimming
I like that stuff becuse that kind of stuff just thrills me i love doing things that i love not because other like that stuff i do.
My favorite hobby is playing Soccer because i play soccer with my brothers alot and im goaly alot so I get lots of practice.
Reasons
1)becauseim going to be in soccer next year.
2)because its my favorite sport.
3)because I get lots of exercise in practises and games.
One of my hobby's is playing on my MP4. I found you can do photos and videos. My other hobby is lego. I can builed lots of thing's. My favorite hobby's are my MP4 player and my lego.
My favorite hobby is Hockey.it is my favurite because i've been playing it for a long time and because it has grown to be my favorite sport/hobby.Its also my favorite hobby because my whole family has played it their whole live except my sister she has'nt played ever.i still love to play it every Tuesday mornings at 6.15.My name is Daulton and my favorite sport/hobby is hockey.
My favourite hobby is art i though art was hard but know i like it i have been practicing art at home
My favourite hobby is art i though art was hard but know i like it i have been practicing art at home
My favourite hobby is horseback riding. I have one horse named Bubba. He is a lazy butt and he is obbsessed with oats. I got him over summer vacation. I feel bad for him because at his old home he had a German shepered that would sleep under his feet at night. Now that he's at my house he always tries to do the same with my dog, but she always bites at him. Bubba is a gelding.
My favourite hobby is playing on the computer. I like playing on the computer because there is a lot to do on the computer. I use my mom's computer. I wish I had internet on it. It is not wireless. If I want to use internet, I have to go in the office and play. That is why I have lots of computer games. My favourite game is Sims 3. I wish I had my own computer!
The hobby I like the most is playing on the computer.
I have many hobbies but my favorite one is dirtbiking in the summer. My cousins and I will bike around the yard. We take jumps, rough races and free rides. We will ride in diches , roads and trails. I like dirtbiking because I will crash and get more exerience.
My favorite hobby is hockey. There are to different types of hockey. Grass hockey and ice hockey. grass hockey is usually played in hot places like South Africa. Ice hockey is what I play in Canada. In south africa they were no gear and the stickes are way different then ice hockey sticks.Hockey is a fun and active sport.
My favorite hobby is fine arts.My
favroite hobby is fine arts because
I am good at it.One time i drew a hand holding a sword and itlooked real.I had shading on it and everething so thats why i like drawing.My favorite hobby is fine arts.
1)My hobby is hockey i like hockey because it is healthy.I play hockey mostly every day for one houre and fifteen minits.
My hoppies are dirt biking because
i lik to feel the wind in my face.
kinda like qurading.
i also play gutar as one of my hoppies i play gutar because i like to learn new song and it is exciting.also i do fishing because
it is so exciting because you never know what you are going to catch and i also like to smoke it and eat it mmm good.i also do running as one of my hoppies because a like to stay in shape that is why me and my friend tanner built a fort 1/2 a kilomator awar and we also go alking in the morning.
my favorite hobby is playing outside i have lots of space outside. I am going to go out after school.that is my favorite hobby.
hi my favorite hobbie is hockey it is lots of fun you can hit score shoot and you have5 people on at a time .
my favorite hobby is working on a farm and riding horses .
I love riding horses and i train them to.
i have so many horses and cattle of my onne. my color of cattle is red. my cousens and i each pick a coluor and the cows we get or are born on are farm and if it is are coluor we get that cow. how we pay my grandpa for feeeding them and giving them a place to stay well this is how pay him is raking the hay and looking after the farm.when it is caving time i get up early and ride the horse to make shore won of the cows is not having troble.once i was riding my horse after school in cattle making shore the cows wernt having troble and three cows were having troble and nobdy was there sept my grandma so i slowly put them in then i got off my horse ran to my grandmas house and foned my grandpa and my anties and my mom so then evry body cam and i puld the cafe.that day i saved 4 cows and 3 caves.love megan
hi Mrs French
my favourit hobby is...
hunting and fishing while on a camping trip all at the same time. If hunting means deer, elk, bison, mountin goats and mouse than count me in! Fishing is fun, when you get a 15 pounder COHO on well your gonna have a ball because I fish with a center pin fishing rod so I really feel and fight the fish there.
my favourit place to camp at is Kitamat B.C. Now that is camping!
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My favorite hobby is acting. My favorite hobby is acting because it makes me feel different. Another reason is I love singing. I've been in five plays. Those are the reasons my favorite hobby is acting.
My favarite hobbies are.Drawing and basketballare my hobbies.I like drawing because it's fun.I like basketball because my freinds are in it.These are my hobbies.
My hobby is football.I like to play football because it's fun to hit people.Football is my hobby because i like it.I like to play football with my faimly because it's a ative spart.My hobby is football.
my hobby is football.
i like football because it has contackt.i like to run in football.
i like football because you can hit someone and not get mad. football is fun because it is running hiting and blocking.
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