Hello Grade Fives!
This week, I would like you to write about your Christmas holidays (e.g. what you did, what you enjoyed the most, or any focus you choose)
Just a reminder that a paragraph contains:
a) topic (promise) sentence: what you promise to tell the reader about
b) at least three support sentences (at least): specific examples or details about your topic
c) concluding sentence: where you remind the reader what you promised to tell the reader
Remember to reread your post before submitting it, checking your spelling and punctuation.
As always, I am looking forward to reading your responses!
30 comments:
The most fun i had was on Christmas and New Years Eve.
becuase I got lots of cool stuff on Christmas.
On New Years Eve i stayed up all night and it was fun.
the most fun I had was on Christmas and New Years Eve.
My chritsmas was so awsome I enjoyed spending it with my family. I got lots of stuff but that dosnt matter.i also was so exited on christmas eve when my dad and mom woke up.I stood up an said yay its christmas.My mom made us some hot choclate and then we opened Are presents.And thats what christmas is all about.
I hade a lot of fun on the christmas holiday. I hade my family come to my house. We played a game i can not remember what it was. Then i went to nick's house. Then i went to hunters house and we went sleding and then we went to the biships house and ate pizza and it was good. And the next day we went to church and it was kinda boring. Then after we got back from church and went skeaing and i got big air and it hurt and hunter laughed and then he got hurt and i laughed it was funny though and the his brother came out and he went snowbording. My holiday was fun.
I had a good Chrismas. I got lots of books. The books were about World War 11 in the concentration camp. Then the ether book is about when the war endide then the ether war book it is about the pilite. Then I got some games. I got some candy and some t-shirts and I got a hudy. Then I got some movies.
My Christmas holidays were awsome. First on Christmas day I woke up at 3:00 in the morning.Then my mom came downstairs and I had to go to bed again. Later in the day we opened presents.I got Final Fantasy 4,wheel of fortune the board game, 190$,a stuffie,some figurines and a webkin.Those were my Christmas holidays.
My Christmas,
My Christmas was fun but not as fun as I thought it was going to be. I got lot's of presents but I don't really remember lots of them because my mind is blank today. We had lot's of people at my aunties. I had two Christmas's one at my moms and one at my dads. The food was good on Christmas. My christmas was fun.
My holidays were very fun this year. First, I had my birthday on the 19th (really on the 20th). I had three friends over the first thing we did was I went sleding. We had lots of fun with that. Then we got the skidoo's out and towed people on tubes. Then we did a tresure hunt and open present and had cake. Next it was Christmas. We had are cousins and aunts and uncles over from Austrailia. For Christmas I got a snowboard, card games, board games, choclate, lots of lego, close, a camera, books, money and Wii games. For New Years we set of fire works and had a small party. I had a great Christmas Vacation
I had a turky on Cristmas eve.I got a few books.a RC helocpter. candy and chocolate.lots of clothes.My Christmas was good
My christmas Holidays. On my holidays we went to the airport to pick up my grampa who lives in Nelson. Then it was chistmas day i got a snowboad. On dec 28 we went snowboading at murruy ridge.
but i relley injoyed having my grampa up.
On Christmas my family all got together and opened presents. I got alot of fun stuff. I got a camra for Christmas. I got a remout control lego. I also made a deal with my sister that we will not fight in 2010. I had a good Christmas.
This holiday was probbly the best. My lovely grandparents came over for the short holidays. On Christmas Eve me and my family (including my Baba) sang carols at my beautiful church. I got a brown and white shitshu puppy on christmas eve as an early present from my grampa! On christmas day I got a Wii with Rockband (Beatles), mario kart and Wii sports! I also got striped, blue pajamas, a Harry Potter DVD set and a scrapbooking set which I use constantly. I had the best holiday yet!!!
On this holiday I got to open a present on chistmas eve it was a webkinz called a Peperment puppy. On chistmas I got remote control helekopter,hair waver,DS stuf like styluses that are multi coloured, game cases, 3 games for my PS2 they are, crash Bandicoot wrath vortex, crash bandicoot twin sanity,G force and lots of pillows of all shapes and sizes.That is basicly what I got for chistmas.
Over the winter holidays I had lots of fun. My cousins came and we snowmobiled alot. Alot of my aunts and uncles came too. My favorite of my gifts is my hot pink ipod. I also like my dimond neclace I got from my uncle. (My mom says I am not allowed to wear it because the chain is to thin.) I got alot of books and the whole dear dumb dairy set. I had a very exiting holiday.
I am going to tell you about my Christmas. For Christmas I got a playstaion3 and eight games. I got a lot of clothes. I got a basketball and hoop. I got a guitar and lessons. I also got to spend five days with my great grandparents. I also got lego and a new wooden pen shaped like a lions head and body. That is what I got for Christmas.
My Christmas I got a ipod,and a helacoer.I osow got new ds. My brother got a ds to.I osow got a psp and some clows. My older brother got gitare.
I had a lot of fun on Christmas holidays. At first we opened a present on Christmas Eve it was that alien maker kind of thing it was called Martion Matter well that's how I think it is spelled. then came Christmas morning I was awake at about 7 in the morning. My brother on the other had woke up at 7.30 in the morning. When I woke up my sister was there and her boyfriend his name is Jon and my sister's name is Lindsay. I got a whole lot of presents this year, but my favoritte present is my ipod nano that I got. It took us about 2 hous to open everything. Then after that we went to Fort ST. James to have our Christmas dinner and it was delicius. Those are all the thing's that made this Christmas holday fun.
I went to alberta to visit my dad for this christmas holidays.
When i visited him we went to grand prairie, thats where I was born.This year I got everything I asked for.this christmas my dad was in a wheel chair from putting up christmas lights and thats why he has two broken ankles.My favorit part of the hoidays was spending time with everyone and I met a new grama and grampa and there daughter which my dad and her are now togherther and I like her! MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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The part that i liked about the holidays was opening the presents.The first present that i got was a ROCK POLISHER anther words Jellery Maker.The second present was a big soft blanket from my grandma and my grandpa the blanket the design on the blanketwas a one baby foal and a stallen.
my chistmas was good.we wen sleding behyned the ski-doo. the best part was when we went sking and hiting junps .we also went sking behyned the ski-doo.my family got to come up it was so much fun
My Cristmas holadys were awesome.
The best part was no school. spending nights at my friends houses was cool to.I like spending time with my family to.I like the Cristmas holidays.I got 4 ps3 games
that are like 60-70$
My favorite thing I did on the Christmas break was snowmobiling.
I like it the most because I have alot of snow at my house. Me and my family go on snowmobile rides in the forest and around the naberhood. I also like snowmobileing because it gets me out of the house more. I have my own snowmobile. That is why I like snowmobiling.
This Christmas I got presents and I went to my friends places.The very first place I went to was on the first Saturday, I went to, Matthews place for a birthday party. Then after that I went to my friend Quins place for the night.
A couple days later we had Christmas for Christmas I got a lego set, a drawing book, a fanypack, a deboning knife and took and some more stuff.This was my Christmas.
This what I did over the Winter Holidays. I went to Prince George to go christmas shopping for my whole family, we bought a lot of things for my family. We had a Christmas Eve dinner with some of my parents friends,then after we went to church, the church was really full! then the next morning, me and my younger sister woke up at 6:30 in the morning and tried to wake our parents up, it didn't work. We opened lots of presents, I counted in total that I got 16 presents. My favourite present was the 1000 ds games on a game card. Then for new years my sister and my mom and my older sister and me (but not dad) stayed up until midnight, then I probably didn't sleep until 4:00 in the morning. the day after that we went bowling with my friend Vivianne, it was fun! We played 2 games then I won 2nd each game, Then after we went bowling, we went to Tim Hortons for some yummy prizes!3 donuts each! Those were some of the main things I did for the Winter Holidays.
My favorite Christmas moment was
when I got my canucks jersey signed
Alex borrows and christion airhoff.
they play for the vancouver canuks.I like the canuks my brothers jersey was the new logo my'n was the old logo but I like my'n alot better those are the reasons my Christmas break was good.
This is what i did on my holiday.
Wene i got home i put my snow gear on and played with brouno.Wene i played with brouno i preetended to be a gout or dog.Wene i was a gout i portected Bananabred my sisters gout.I wenet sleding with my dad and sister.After christmas wene i got my guinea pig londery i would play with her a lot.Sometimes i would explore in my forest with my three dogs rocxy,brouno and rustey or dipstick what my dad calls him.With my guinea pig i would let here explore in my room but i kept the cats away.Wene i played with my cats i would preetened to be a cat.After i went to my friends place there names are Amanda,jesey and the babys name is brin.That was my holiday.:) bye:)
I went to vancoover langley then I went to edmonten then to micbride then back home and then when we got home I went skiing.
when I went to vancover langley I visitted my step dads parents I had fun and got lots of presents.When I went to edmonton I visted my rell dad and my gandma,grandpa it was fun whill we where there we whent to micbride we visted other relitivs on my dads side and my cousan and I whent scating all day.then we came home and we whent skiing it was so so fun and i got my ohnn skiies and stoff. My holiday was so so fun as you can see. happy new year
I had lots of fun on my holidays. I went to matthew's birthday party and had lots of fun. For christmas my sisters came up from vancuver. We built a skating rink on the river that was the most work over the holidays because twice a day we would have to go down and shovel off the whole rink. So i had lots of fun things to do on my holidays.
Evry year on christmas eve we go to my grandma & granpa's house. We always have a big dinner. then all the kids will play for a little. then we go to the N.C.C church for the servise. We come back & do presents after that.
I had a lot of fun over the holidays. my favorit part was giving away pressents,getting pressents.my freind linden makow said he saw santa.I went to my grandmas house for chrissmas.I got alot of stuff.
For Christmas I got so much stuff. I got lots of Lego. I got a easy bake oven and some star wars action figures. I got a star wars action figure turbo tank that cost one hundred dollars I also got a boogey board.
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